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First Second And Third Person

First Second And Third Person

Just who is telling this story? In this lesson, we'll look at point of view, or the perspective from which a work is told. We'll review first person, second person and third person points of view.

Point of View

Everywhere I go, people ask me for my point of view. Wait, no, I mean: everywhere you go, people ask you for your point of view. Hmm, still not right. Everywhere they go, people are asked for their points of view.

Me, you, them - what's it all about? Of course, I'm talking about those surveys that fill our inboxes and are at the ends of seemingly every receipt. I'm just buying a pack of gum; I'm not interested in answering 30 questions about the experience. I really don't have a point of view on the matter.

But, even if I don't have a point of view in terms of an opinion, there's always a point of view in terms of how I write. This point of view can be defined as the perspective from which a work is written. There are three types of point of view: first person, second person and third person.

You'll use different ones depending on what type of work it is, as well as what you're trying to do with it. In this lesson, we'll define each type of point of view, look at examples and cover the situations in which each is useful. There will be no survey at the end for you to complete. Or will there?

First Person

If you're like me, it makes sense to start with me. I mean, why shouldn't I be first? Okay, I'm not really talking about me. I'm talking about our first point of view: first person. This is when the narrator is referring to him or herself. You will see 'I,' 'me,' 'my' and 'mine' in first person.

Color Me Mine? First person. First person shooter games? Yep, first person (though kind of violent). The Beatles' song I Me Mine? Super-duper first person. First person point of view can also involve 'we,' 'us' and 'our.' Really, as long as the narrator includes him or herself, it's first person.

Many novels are written in the first person. For example, there's F. Scott Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby. Here's the opening line: 'In my younger and more vulnerable years my father gave me some advice that I've been turning over in my mind ever since.' My, my, me, I've, my... this is clearly first person point of view. Same goes for Herman Melville's Moby Dick: 'Call me Ishmael.' Ishmael is our narrator, and he's in the story talking about himself.

Other than fiction, when would you use first person? Anything autobiographical, like a memoir or personal essay; if it's you writing about you, then first person is the way to go. I wouldn't write about myself, 'Jeff went on to win the unprecedented Nobel Prize, Super Bowl MVP and World Karaoke Championship trifecta.' That would be weird.

First person point of view is rarely seen in academic writing. It's considered less objective than third person, which we'll discuss later.

Second Person

For your own writing, it's critical that you're consistent with your point of view within a work. In Moby Dick, if Ishmael stopped narrating the story, it would be jarring.

Likewise, what if we rewrote the opening of Ernest Hemingway's The Old Man and the Sea to shift point of view. It starts: 'He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and you had gone 84 days now without taking a fish. In the first 40 days a boy had been with me.' Wait, what? It's confusing, right? That 'you' should be 'he,' and that 'me' should be 'him.'

As for identifying point of view, it's important to note that first and second person works can contain third person pronouns. For example, you could say, 'I bought him a biscuit.' That 'him' doesn't make it third person. But third person works will usually only contain 'I' or 'you' in dialogue or quotations.

Focus on the narration, and the pronouns will guide you. If there's any 'I,' 'me' or 'mine,' then it's first person. If there's any 'you' or 'yours,' it's second person. There's no 'I' or 'you' in third person. There's just 'he,' 'her,' 'his,' 'hers' and 'their.' Well, ok, technically there is an 'I' in third person, but it's a little 'i.'

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